vox nihili

I like it. I think I prefer the first, as some of the rhymes, well, I don't know. Rhyme without meter is more difficult to appreciate, not to criticize your ...

Wow. This is amazing. I love poetry that's abstract like this (if that's the right term for it, I guess I'm thinking abstract like artwork). You pull it off much ...

This is amazing! I love the candid descriptions, idiosyncratic characters, Fischer mostly, and the mysterious, hard-eyed girl who shows up. Fears of rabid rats puts the horror on with a ...

A young man stood on the boards of the Mylin city square, his feather cloak pulled tightly about his neck. The sky showed black clouds that signified heavy weather soon ...

It does have an interesting premise, I agree, but there are some major flaws that make it an overwhelming read. It's hard to concentrate on enjoying the plot for the ...

"What the h*ll!" My door is slowly opening outwards....covered in white STUFF. Pasty, shiny like yogurt, only it smells like...mayo... My god! As if being attacked three weeks ago wasn't ...

Overall impression: pretty good! I like the imagery and the language is something along the lines of haunting. Criticisms: Line 4 of the first stanza doesn't make sense. Its syntax ...

Stella- It's just changes some. I'm not sure if it's what could be called a linear sort of pattern, but it's going. Things are going to happen...just as well that ...

Thanks for the review! On them falling in love; my goal in this chapter is to show that she's begrudgingly biding her time, as he's her only means of survival, ...

Kudos on the birds! They're magnificent. It feels like they're looking at me. I especially love the shading in the darker feathers of the left bird. The bird on the ...

This is really cool. I love the blending and highlights in her hair. Her left eyelashes are also beautiful. Things that can be improved: the background shading: the deft strokes ...

Overall: It's gorgeous. Her clothes look really cool, her hair is very realistic, and the wicked-awesome blue thing above her hand shows us she's got some sort of supernatural powers. ...

While the metric system is indeed distinctly more useful, as several people have pointed out, it would be an immense pain where the sun don't shine. On the point of ...

My Dear Americans, There is something I wish to direct your attentions to, and that something is the existence of British English. Although essentially the same as American English in ...

I'm planning to write more about what happens in the interim between this scene and my last scene (Fleirzon: 19) but at the moment, it won't come to me. However, ...